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Could I have some feedback please on my designs?

ASDDan23

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Hello all.

I am Daniel, graphic design degree student. As part of a module, I am working on a design project focused on creating a text based awareness campaign that challenges the negative stereotypes of autism and educates neurotypical people about the disability.

My target audience is those who show a strong interest in autism or those that want to show more, or those who know how the message of autism could be spread across to neurotypical people or be more impactful with the right font.

I am considering to go with one of the designs below for my final poster. Which one of these designs do you prefer?
 

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Yeah, the letter mostly just looks like it was sliced in half for no reason.

I'd say, you almost got it right, but close it up instead.

Like this:

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Obviously that's like a 7-second sketch and I didnt add that bit at the bottom right but it is the basic idea that I mean. Use contrasting color (or just bright white) to make the symbol stand out against the surrounding color.

That being said, the one issue you're likely to run into in either case is the text in the infinity symbol; unless you're making an absolutely enormous poster/image, it'll be mostly impossible to read except for really close up, particularly for anyone with bad eyesight (always an issue with lettering in general).

I'm curious though, why the infinity symbol specifically?


Anyway there's honestly a bazillion ways you could approach the whole thing... dont be afraid to switch things up. Lettering is a hobby/interest of mine, but even with lots of practice I find that it can be hard to get quite the right "look" or font to truly fit whatever you're making with it. Dont be afraid to try an unusual font (often seen in lettering in general, they can get quite strange) as opposed to sticking with a purely traditional one. Not that the one you're using is bad... it isnt. But I'd say, experiment a bit with some others and compare the results before choosing a final design. Though you may have already done that, I dont know.

Hope that helps at least a little.
 
I think regardless if your focus is on stomping out some general stereotypes of Autism or focusing instead on highlighting some positives, you will not be able to please all, as some here wished they never had Autism or are struggling much with such, some others seem at the other end and focus on the strengths of being Autistic or they are proud of who they are, while a bigger percentage are perhaps in-between and they may be sort of neutral to their condition, meaning they see both pros and cons--strengths and limitations--from having Autism.

So, my views on what I liked about the design would likely differ from others, and from yourself if you are an NT. As I am a more positive person, I likely would not have the stereotypes being foot stomped out, as I feel it calls more attention to negatives that many rather not advertise more. Also, most may have not even noticed that as symbolic of a foot anyway above the red words. If you are going to do that, put a little more graphic there, like some boot shape there, etc., to highlight that disgust with the stereotypes more, and so many do not overlook that part of the design.

I realize though you probably made the red stereotypes smaller font, symbolic of you wanting them to go away, and you also may have decided it to not be in the center of the design as it would call attention more to those negatives. And perhaps you did not try to be more specific about the stereotypes for the same reasons of reinforcing those. But, overall, I would have preferred a more positive design about Autism, to offset the far more negative specific stereotypes that exist too much. But, I balance that with, "But, this could be unfair to those who are really suffering from the condition they were born with?"

Overall, I just feel listing or implying any negatives, even if the purpose was to have public perception change there, may not sway many to stop those or other stereotypes. If Autism cannot be changed or should not be changed much anyway, for many who believe that, and from seeing many on the Spectrum against those who are pushing for that, perhaps I feel a more better design would either be more focusing on either the positives of Autism, or more neutral message, where we are humans too who have many strengths too, desiring to be ourselves and do the best we can.

When you say "Autism is not a choice It is reality" this I do not have much problem with, as more persons than not would not find offense there but truth. The infinity symbol is often overused I feel, so if I were a new designer I may have tried to come up with something else. The Blue A and Green A seem a bit bland because of the one color. I'd have made it up to three to four colors maximum. I am biased in liking blue, red, white and black/gray, so I personally would have used more of those colors in any letter A. You did blue, black and red words, but I'd have had those colors more on the A.

I likely would have changed the font or design of the A, to have it stand out more, and perhaps I'd have used an acrostic message in the design somewhere focusing on Autism strengths, like by changing the title to: Autism: Absolutely Unique, Totally Interesting, Specially Motivated. Whether these words were in the letter A or forming the letter A, those are examples. Would not a more uplifting message cause perceptions to change for the better more? Also, you could then list on the design some specific examples of varying talents, skills and traits, like pattern recognition, logic, memory, facts, details, pitch, truth, routine, rules, science, etc.

But again, everybody would have their own ideas there. I just know if NTs don't advertise their limitations, needs or any negative things on a design why should Autistics? Make them get the other side of Autism.
 
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Someone is going to pay you to choose a cause and make some sort of design and possibily information campaign?
 
My first thought was that they're beautiful and powerful, and that was before reading any of the words.
 
Someone is going to pay you to choose a cause and make some sort of design and possibily information campaign?

Hello Tom. No, they are not going to pay me because it is just a brief that I am working on for a module.
 
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Without breaking confidentiality, what is general purpose of the campaign? I like the designs, but I can't tell what kind of an impact they would make without knowing the target audience.

Hello Yeshuasdaughter. The general purpose of the campaign is to challenge the negative stereotypes about autistic people and educate neurotypicals about autism, so they have a better understanding of the disability. My target audience is those who show a strong interest in autism or those that want to show more, or those who know how the message of autism could be spread across to neurotypical people or be more impactful with the right font.
 
Hello Tom. No, they are not going to pay me because it is just a brief that I am working on for a module.

Ok. I understand the not getting paid part.

The rest not so much. Literal thinker that I am it goes something like:

'I am just working on a brief...'

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'... for a module.'

mars-module-and-landscape-3d-models-3d-model-low-poly-obj-fbx-blend-dae-abc-gltf.jpg


So you are designing space underwear? For free?

;)
 
Ok. I understand the not getting paid part.

The rest not so much. Literal thinker that I am it goes something like:

'I am just working on a brief...'

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'... for a module.'

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So you are designing space underwear? For free?

;)


Hello Tom.

Sorry. By a brief, I mean a paper with a set of instructions about a design project. So, I am working on a project. I have explained what my project entails on the thread.
 
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Replace the 20 with your infinity sign and USA with 'First Aspie President'. And maybe give him googly eyes. It's probably not true, but it's ok to lie for a good brief module.

;)

Don't mind me. I am often just half or entirely joking around. I do wish you luck with your project.
 
Yeah, the letter mostly just looks like it was sliced in half for no reason.

I'd say, you almost got it right, but close it up instead.

Like this:

View attachment 78757

Obviously that's like a 7-second sketch and I didnt add that bit at the bottom right but it is the basic idea that I mean. Use contrasting color (or just bright white) to make the symbol stand out against the surrounding color.

That being said, the one issue you're likely to run into in either case is the text in the infinity symbol; unless you're making an absolutely enormous poster/image, it'll be mostly impossible to read except for really close up, particularly for anyone with bad eyesight (always an issue with lettering in general).

I'm curious though, why the infinity symbol specifically?


Anyway there's honestly a bazillion ways you could approach the whole thing... dont be afraid to switch things up. Lettering is a hobby/interest of mine, but even with lots of practice I find that it can be hard to get quite the right "look" or font to truly fit whatever you're making with it. Dont be afraid to try an unusual font (often seen in lettering in general, they can get quite strange) as opposed to sticking with a purely traditional one. Not that the one you're using is bad... it isnt. But I'd say, experiment a bit with some others and compare the results before choosing a final design. Though you may have already done that, I dont know.

Hope that helps at least a little.

Hello Misery.

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

I have chosen the infinity symbol because autistic people take a liking to it and it shows a spectrum of colours representing the autism spectrum. Whereas, there is controversy surrounding the jigsaw piece.
 

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