I once forked out for a professionally written CV, and what came back was rubbish - I had more luck when writing the CV myself. Basically, because he thought I shouldn't use the word 'I' in the CV, every sentence started with a gerund or past participle, and sounded very stilted and unnatural.
"Having completed..., worked...
"Wanting to...."
"Intending to...", etc.
"Having completed..., worked...
"Wanting to...."
"Intending to...", etc.
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